The question as to whether children should be constantly
corrected while reading is one which sparks up many different issues. By
analysing a transcript of 7 year old George reading a section of Biff and Chip
book, we can look at whether it is more effective to correct children during
speech, or let them figure it out for themselves.
By
looking at the transcript between George and his mother, it is evident that
there are many examples of correction in order to improve George's speech.
According to Skinner's operant conditioning theory, language needs to be learnt
through positive and negative reinforcement. This way, a child will associate a
reward (or no reward) with a response. By referring to the data given, George's
mother provides positive reinforcement when he correctly says "they saw a
lorry (2.0)" and "in (2.0) the street it was (.) loaded". She
says "yeah that's right" and "that's it" in order to
encourage George to carry on speaking the way he is. As well as this example of
positive reinforcement, George's mum demonstrates negative reinforcement and
corrects the verb “made” to become “may” in the middle of George’s utterance.
This immediate response shows George that he used the incorrect morpheme
because they had similar phonemes e.g. ‘may’ and ‘made’. The quick correction
allows George to carry on so it doesn’t disrupt the flow of his utterance. Following
the reinforcement, George uses the correct morpheme and says “may get worse”,
just like it says in the book he is reading. By referring to Skinner’s theory,
it is evident that using correction techniques such as positive/negative reinforcement,
causes children’s miscues to be re-worded and improved.
Furthermore, Vygotsky’s theory of the Zone of Proximal
Development (ZPD) supports the statement that young readers need to be corrected
when they make a mistake. When George makes a mistake in his speech, his mother
is there to model and scaffold the language he uses, in order to enhance his
development. For example, the mitigated imperative “watch the endings” in
response to George missing out the pluralisation of “house”. Not only this, George
realises he needs to use the standard term “we need” instead of “we never” after
his mother uses a mitigated correction of “nooo” to highlight his error. By
softening the harshness of her response, it indicates to George that he needs
to self-correct. With reference to Vygotsky’s theory, it is apparent that
George’s mum has provided him with the scaffolding he needs to acquire
language, and it is effective. Therefore, young readers should be corrected and
supported whenever they make a mistake.
Despite the data being supported by certain theorists, the
answer is not fully dependable on them. According to Piaget’s 4 Critical Stage
Theory, George is beginning the Concrete Operational stage, being 7 years old.
Piaget’s theory suggests that children actively explore and make sense of the
world around them, mostly without guidance from their caregivers. At this
stage, George would be expected to begin to think logically, but sometimes
struggle with abstract concepts. For example, it can be said that he still
struggles with concepts such as the “endings” of morphemes. He miscues more
than once during the transcript by using “never” instead of “need”, and “made”
instead of “may”. This suggests that George is at the very early stages of the
Concrete Operational stage, but will progress as he gets older.
Overall, it can be said that children need to be corrected
when they make mistakes in speech. If they didn’t, then they would never
develop and acquire language the way adults do. However, when being corrected
all the time, a child would be concentrating too much on saying it right,
instead of actually following the narrative of a book like they should be. So,
correcting through positive/negative reinforcement and scaffolding is useful as
it provides a model for children, however, too much of it can affect their
confidence and ability to speak fluently.
Highlight key opposing theorists and define your terms in the intro.
ReplyDeleteImprove his speech or reading? Rather than "she says", try and identify techniques e.g. 'uses the positive face declaratives' to cram more terminology and theory in.
Use 'mother' not "mum" to maintain a formal, academic register.
Evaluate how far scaffolding is correction.
Your ideas are good but need more subtle exploration in the light of the data - highlight complexities in terms of how far the evidence may support multiple theories and evaluate the reliability of the data in context.