
1) Text A is an online forum about the topic of ‘proms’
and the issues surrounding it. The website, ‘mumsnet’ is a place for discussion
and offering advice. This can be supported by the ‘mumsnet’ logo being shown at
the top of the page. Furthermore, it is clear that the purpose is to converse
because there are adjacency pairs throughout. An example of this is woollyideas’ comment ‘Yes Kayano’ in
response to a comment made five minutes before. It can be said that this shows
interaction between the users of the site. The audience of the forum would most
likely be mums of teenagers aged 16-18. This is because at this stage, parents
would be in the process of buying prom gear for their children and so will be
seeking advice.
Colloquial language is used in Text A.
Examples of this are ‘back in the day’, ‘naff’ and ‘max’. This lexis is used
because of the informal register of the forum and the fact that there is no
need to be speaking with correct grammar. It could also be said that the forum
consists of a hybrid of written and spoken language. The adjacency pairs, for
one, but also the non-standard English such as ‘Yep’ used in many peoples
comments.
A grammatical feature such as a
subordinating conjunction is used by
muckycarpet. For example, ‘Although the helicopter is way too OTT!’
following ‘Don’t be a grump!’ The use of the conjunction ‘Although’ shows that
the commenter sees both perspectives to the issue and shows support towards woollyideas.
Graphological features such as the
‘confused’ emoji in woollyideas’ last
comment is a feature of online usage. It uses computer aided communication to
express emotions and feelings (without the use of lexis.) This is relevant to
the form of the forum because modern advances in technology allows us to use
different features online. This could lead us to suggest that woollyideas is more up-to-date with the
technology we are familiar with today.
To summarise, Text A is an online forum with
an informal register such as ‘Am I being unreasonable?’ followed by interaction
between people. It can also be said that, because of the frequent use of
interrogatives, the purpose is to seek guidance and advice.
2)
Text B is an online newspaper article by ‘The
Mirror’. This is shown by the recognisable logo at the top of the page indicating
that the article is reliable and trustworthy. The purpose of the article is to
inform. The frequent use of technical lexis as well as facts and figures
supports the fact that this article aims to educate people of the issues
surrounding prom. The audience of the article would be parents and carers of
teenagers aged 16-18. This is because it very much revolves around the subject
of money. Stereotypically, the parents would be the people paying for prom
outfits, and so this article would interest them. Despite this, the article may
also be aimed at teenage boys because it involves them, therefore they may be
interested.
Proper nouns are used throughout Text B.
For example, ‘formal shirts, shoes and bow ties’ as well as ‘tuxedos’ are nouns
used to describe the extent to which boys are buying things for prom. This is
also an example of field specific lexis. This is used to create a definite
subject are of the article, and so readers know what type of items boys are
buying.
Complex syntax is used throughout text B.
Longer sentences such as ‘We have seen an increase in occasion wear sales since
January whereas guys have been rushing in last minute to get ready for the big
night.’ This is used to fulfil the form and formal register of the newspaper
article.
The statement that boys are ‘looking to
celebrities such as David Beckham and Daniel Craig for their inspiration’ uses
proper nouns. Pragmatically, this syntax connotes the fact that it is not just
females who face the pressures of society. Males also try to gain unrealistic
outcomes and have the expectations of looking like movie stars. This is further
supported by the image of Daniel Craig at the top of the article. The article
signifies the fact that boys are aspiring to be the people on TV, which is not realistic
at all. Furthermore the noun ‘Boys’ used in the headline has negative
connotations. Usually, when we say ‘boy’ we immediately think of a childish
male who has not yet matured (as opposed to a ‘man’.) This really highlights
the fact that males who are buying prom outfits will never reach their goals of
looking like their role model because they are still children.
1)
Text A, an online forum on the website ‘Mumsnet’
uses colloquial language throughout when people are conversing with each other.
These are features of every day conversation which are used because of the
informal register of the forum. Dissimilarly, Text B is a newspaper article
with a much more formal register than Text A. It uses technical lexis such as
‘spending on average £385. It is clear that these two texts are different in
their register and mode.
Text A uses interrogatives throughout. For
example, ‘who are these parents who think this sort of expenditure on a night
out for a teenager is okay?’ This phrase could suggest that woollyideas is criticising the actions
of parents who do spend money on their children. In context, it could also
suggest that woollyideas is happy to
criticise because this is on the internet. Therefore, people do not know of her
identity and so she can say what she likes.
In contrast, Text B does not use any
interrogatives, but declaratives instead. For example, the way role models ‘are
smartening up male school leavers’. The auxiliary ‘are’ is stating that this is
definitely happening. This, as well as the technical terms used is relevant to
the purpose of informing, whereas Text A is to discuss.
Throughout the article of Text B, technical
lexis such as facts and figures are used to exaggerate the issue of boys and
proms. This could link to the Grice’s Maxim of Quality, because the lexis is as
informative as it can be. In contrast to Text A, it lacks in technical lexis
because of the purpose and informal register of ‘Mumsnet’.
Question Paper: http://filestore.aqa.org.uk/resources/english/AQA-77011-SQP.PDF
Data Booklet: http://filestore.aqa.org.uk/resources/english/AQA-77011-SDB.PDF